On Monday 20th Dec 2010, I had watched the Herbie fully loaded movie. The movie is about a racecar that was brokened, wonderfull, it's alive and it know anythings like the man. The car's name was Herbie 53. One day Makkie Peyton(actress)got graduated, her father(Peyton) gave her some gift, that is a used car (Herbie). Herbie was so happy and it drove to Race car with Makkie and Kavin (Actor). Herbie wanted Makkie to race with Trip Murphy. And Makkie drove automatically, she was very wonderfull ,and then she wined. After that, her fther knew about her racing. Her father was dissatisfied and told her don't race again. One day Makkie and Kavin had read a newspaper about two-day racing event that the grand prize was $10,000 then Kavin and Makkie agreed to race. Then they helped together to repaire Herbie for race. and they are fell in love together. On the racing day, Makkie was so excited ,because she had to race with Trip Murphy. By the way on Herbie was so tired and anything gon wrong with Herbie, however Makkie was the winner in the end with the patience of Herbie. Makkie was so happy when she wined Trip Murphy.
Herbie: I felt impressed with love that Herbie gave to its owner (Makkie).
Makkie: She is very nice and smart.
Kavin: I like kavin so much, because he was handsome and smart, esppecially, he has a prominent
nose.
Dear Googgig,
ตอบลบThanks for telling me about Herbie. So, do you like only 4 things on this movie? Didn't you get any ideas on it?
Tell me about your impression either good or bad mood.
I will wait to see it.
Hello!
ตอบลบI think the word "Makkie" should be "Maggie" naja!but I think trip is handsome more than Kevin.Please!! check spelling such as "fther","repaire"
Bye......
Your article is quite good but you have to write some conclusion sentences for telling the reader about how did this movie made you to like it.Next,There are many spelling's mistakes in your sentences and some ungrammatical sentences in you article.Hope to see you write your article better as soon as it should be.
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