On Monday 27th Dec 2010, I had watched "Coraline" movie. The movie was so terrible and scared. I don't like this movie because the movie was so complex. However, I also like this movie. By the way, this story told me that parents should give enough time for their children. They should try to understand their children and listen to what their children said. In addition, make sure their children were happy with every they gave to them.
Are you confuse in your own article.are you like or didn't like this movie ?
ตอบลบBy the way, you got the good idea from this movie like P'Yuu.I like both of you and P'Yuu.You would better write the longer article.And don't be anxious cause I'll come back to annoying your article again!!!!!
Finally,You have a mistake on the sentence:with every they gave to them.It would better changed to with everything the gave to them.
Dear Junya,
ตอบลบThanks for writing by your own words...I felt bored when seeing your friends copy any tasks of others...
For your wriitng, as Prathan said, there are some mistakes in your writing.
To protect you from other friends felt confused, please change the sentence, "I don't like this movie because the movie was so complex. However, I also like this movie." to be "I both like and dislike this movie. I don't like this movie because the movie was so complex. However, I like this movie because it gives some ideas about family for me too."
Next time, try more...I know you can write it well.
Hi..Janya
ตอบลบI don't know I want talk to you...
Because I think your sentent is true..55+
hello Janya!
ตอบลบI like your ideas,I think same you.